Monday, May 21, 2007

Independent Writing #9

I wrote this because I was thinking about how tired I was, and then I remembered this one dream I had last year. Everything was just not going right at all. I lost everyones trust, I lost everything, everyone. My parents split up, I was seeing a therapist, and there were still so many problems no matter how hard I tried to make them go away. I was lost im my own messed up world, and if you asked me what happened now, I wouldnt have an answer because I dont even remember it. So basically, I was just randomly inspired by this dream I had a year ago. So, ya. Enjoy.

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Will you remember me?

As the spring changes to summer,
and the summer to fall
As the leaves fall from the trees
Into the puddles left by the autumn rain,
Will you look down into them and can you honestly say,
Will you remember me?

As the colors of the sky shift to from blue to gray
And the sun wont come back until I’m gone
Do you look down on me for what I have done

And tell yourself
That forever and all after were in my eyes
Will you remember me?

As I am gone as time goes by
With the changes in your life
Like a petal in the wind
That goes right by your eye,
Is that all that is left of me
Will you remember me?

2 comments:

Sam C said...

whoaaa this is sad kellyyy! your all like, no one will miss meeeee. i like it! <3

Morgan Goold said...

i really really like this and how you repeated the stanza "will you remember me?" your dream sounds sad thought how you lost everything and everyone =[ but its still really good lovie <3