Basically what i wrote about is when you show someone you love them, and they just stop caring about you out of no where. Its about how someone sacrifices themself for someone they love, but the other person doesnt return the sacrifice. In the end someone always ends up getting hurt. My inspiration was my friend. She has been through so many guys this year who she gave her heart to, and in return they just ended up hurting her. It made me feel so bad and I tried to think about how she was feeling, so I decided to write about the things she told me. Enjoy =)
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I gave you my love
You shunned me away
I wanted to know you
You made me frayed
Just for a chance
I’d give you my all
But you refused me
Ignoring my call
You are too busy
To give me the time
Do I make you sick
When we talk online
Am I just a nuisance
A bug to be killed
You are my world
But am I your ill
I don’t have a reason
To live or to die
All I have is a question
This question is why?
2 comments:
gahhh kelly this is amazing and really really sad,
"I don’t have a reason
To live or to die
All I have is a question
This question is why?"
i love that stanza! and i love youu <3
kellyyyyyy boo! this is so heart felt, especially for someone who is in such a good realtionship right now, like yourself. i love the way you rhyme in almost everyone of your poems. it really adds to your message, and is very powerful. good job kelly belly boo! i love you! <3
p.s.-i think this is definatly my favortie one, cuz its all morose and about lost love and such. =]
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