I finished all my homework I got bored in first period study hall. So decided to write something new since I still needed some independent pieces for this class. I had no idea where to start or what to write about so I thought and thought and then I thought of my boyfriend. I reminded myself how much I love him and care about him. Unlike my last boyfriend, he loves me back. So basically, he is the one who inspired me to write this piece. After I wrote it I didnt really want to post it on my blog as one of my independent pieces at first. My friends Elizabeth and Katie both told me that it was really good that I should. So here it is. I hope you like it.
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Not You
How can you see with eyes shut
The time lost is too much
To hold out on
To never care
Just to never remember me there
You choose to stay
I choose to walk away
Onto someone new.
I knew I wouldn't have a problem
Unlike you.
I love him
I care about him
I'd do anything for him
And he would do the same.
Lets see you top that
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Kelly--a little more is expected of your introductions. See the Independnet Writing Blog for instructions, or check out some classmates' introductions.
Nice job with using repetition, homonyms, and imperfect rhyme.
aww this is really cute, i realllyyyy like this one i love how you talk bout how you would do anything for him and he would do anything for you as well <3
oh my goddd kelly i lover this! its like, love but you guys would do anything to keep each other happy and in loooove. i love you too!!!!!!! <3
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